Planning Storyboard for my lip-gloss commercial

Box #1: The first shows the overview of the product. I will begin with an outer angle and then slowly move in on the product and become a close-up. It will be standing on a white desk and an all-white background. This serves as the introduction of the commercial. Box #2: The scene will then transition to the product being open and will show the wand. The product will still be standing on the all-white background. Then, I will demonstrate the product by spinning the product and showing it from different angles. Box #3: The scene will now transition to me on my LED mirror about to apply the product of myself. Showing how easy and quick it can be to apply it and as well the confidence boost you get when wearing the product. The scene will be shot from an angle where the camera cannot be seen in the mirror. Box #4: In the next scene I will be demonstrating the product more close up. Most of the frame will be the lips, I will be doing this so the audience can fully see how the p...